Ah...I've attempted sonnets before, and they're a bit tricky to write, its hard to get a flow going. It seems as though you have no problem with 'em at all...this flows wonderfully, the imagery is great. You've got a knack for this, yes indeed you do. Benjamin P. Albrecht replies: "thank you! i LOVE getting comments from a fellow artistANDwriter. as for sonnets, i enjoy the writing poems with rigid structures--it's actually easier that way, though logic might tell us it should be harder."
25 Jul 2002
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Good stuff Benjamin P. Albrecht replies: "you're right; it's only "good." i write sonnets that my friends and i feel are much better than this, but aren't fantasy; i can't post them. thanx for the compliment."
26 Jul 2002
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Hmmm do you have a personal site? *checks your bio* Benjamin P. Albrecht replies: "i do, but i'm taking it down, because geocities no longer allows you to share written material via briefcase. if you want me to send you one or two, i'll do that."
28 Jul 2002
Oromis at SPD
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Another warrior stood once on the edge, and got too close... falling from the edge of time, we are the forgotten, the betrayed, the lost, the hopeless... Benjamin P. Albrecht replies: "but the real question here is, "who is betraying whom?" often, we know the answer & would rather not admit it."
29 Nov 2002
Jukka Bushtail
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Wait a minute...you came on my site and commented on everything, saying it's too depressing. Practice what you preach, mister! Don't ever come snooping round my turf and do that again! Benjamin P. Albrecht replies: "ah, the righteous indignation of a writer who hates happiness...been there! yeah, even i write sad stuff occasionally. seeking balance...mmm..."
26 Dec 2002
Mallory Stull
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It's so sad. But i love it. Benjamin P. Albrecht replies: "quite to the point. thanks, mal!"
28 Dec 2002
Megan 'Muo Ji' Jenkins
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EEh I so *love* your writing style! This inspires me to actually attempt writing again=^^= my English teacher told me that I should continue writing because he liked my style or whatever but I blew him off but this makes me want to write! Excellent! it's a sad story but then, that's all I CAN write and this well, is just fantabulous if i do say so meself^^ *loves making up words* hehehe pretty style though Benjamin P. Albrecht replies: "thanks! but it is, of course, not my style: it's the style that a lot of poets preferred. it's sonnet! anyway, "demon girl," i really look forward to seeing your writing. or your fanart for that matter (are those pages EVER going to be finished?) thanks!"
16 Feb 2003
L. 'Shanra' Kuepers
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*sobs* So sad...
This was really good, Benjamin ^^ It has very stunning and vivid imagery in it. Personally (as you may have noticed) I prefer freeverse, but tis poems like this one that make me regret that I don't regret not being able to write in set forms. But I'll not bore you with my crazy views on poetry and continue with the comment ^^
As I was saying, it's very vivid in imagery, but also very pulling and touching in emotional sense. It has a wonderful flow and it shows you've mastered two things I will never master Rhyme and a set form. Great job on this ^^ Benjamin P. Albrecht replies: "yes, i have realized your preferences, and i'm glad that you and i can have ours and still enjoy the other's style. thanks awfully!"
24 Mar 2003
Maggie 'Rei' Davidson
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Jinx might like that one. Or not. That was a bad attempt at a joke. I loves it! Benjamin P. Albrecht replies: "jinx's rollerblade hits a pebble and he wipes out, face first..."oh no, i'm a fallen angel!""
27 Sep 2003
Elke *Kanthra* Van den Ende
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Think it's very good. Keep it up Benjamin P. Albrecht replies: "hey, i'm glad you like it! the "keeping it up..." that's another story."
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